Group - Film Opening

The Wakefield Punishment


Feedback 

Each member of the group showed the opening to a number people who meet the requirements of our target audience. We asked them to share what they thought were it's strengths and weaknesses. The following are their responses:

Strengths -

  • There was a very good use of sound effects and music to create the tense atmosphere
  • The head slam effect and sounds were very impactful
  • The profile shots looked unique and showed off the location well
  • The practical effects were ambitious and well executed - The hair raising effect was particularly appreciated, apparently due to its 'different components'.
  • The animated credits added value to the production. their placement, font and animation was good.
  • The visuals were very strong (referring to use of lighting, camera movement, framing)
  • One source said that the lighting was 'impeccable'
  • We explored some effective camera angles
  • The use of fog was a very strong positive asset to the production
  • The choice of location was very good, providing a realistic and convincing environment for the events in the opening

Weaknesses -

  • There is a noticeable audio cut when the protagonist gasps after the head slam
  • The fading out of the church bells makes it obvious that they were added in post